I'm loving the drama of the eye makeup here. I also love a bit of red lippy but would definitely recommend NOT teaming them both.
If you want to go for the dramatic eye then tone down the lipstick with a muted tone or clear gloss.
If it's the lipstick you want then go the other way just adding a simple black line (in the lash line) this gives the dramatic look without the fuss! Maybe add a splash along the inner area of the bottom lash line too.